Star Writer of the Week Moorlands Primary School

All work chosen for Moorlands Star Writer of the Week will be shared here.

Be sure to keep checking our newsletter and website to see who will be the next Moorlands Star Writer!

This week’s Star Writer is Joel from 1P. Joel has been awarded Star Writer for his wonderful sentences about his favourite toy. Joel included lots of describing words and wrote lots of great ideas in the time given. Well done Joel!

This week’s Star Writer is Sam from 6T. Sam has been awarded Star Writer for his narrative writing inspired by the book Friend or Foe. Sam worked hard creating this piece, writing at length with much description, a range of punctuation and using speech to advance action. Well done!

Congratulations to Imogen Naylor (2M) for her fantastic efforts in her writing all term! Imogen always makes sure to use capital letters, finger spaces, and full stops in her work. When editing, she carefully checks and improves her writing- all wonderful signs of an excellent writer in the making. Well done, Imogen!

Raffy in 3HS achieved this award for his exceptional effort in handwriting this extract from his non-fiction report about Woolly Mammoths. He worked really hard to form his letters and joins carefully, remember finger spaces and publish his work neatly - well done Raffy!

Congratulations to Sammy in 4W who has been chosen as 'Star Writer' this week. He has blown us all away with his fantastic Non-Chronological report on Fishbourne Roman Palace. His report includes a clear and informative title that reflects the report's subject, interesting facts about the subject to engage the reader and diagrams and relevant captions to enhance understanding. Great job, Sammy. Be proud!

Chloe from 5W has written a super character description about Danny from the book Danny the Champion of the World. She has included detailed expanded noun phrases and relative clauses all linked to our year group expectations. A fabulous piece!

This week’s Star Writer is Ismaeel in 6C, class. Ismaeel wrote a fantastic diary entry from the viewpoint of the central character in the story Friend or Foe by Michael Morpurgo. Through this piece of writing, Ismaeel was able to portray the thoughts and emotions of a child evacuee during World War Two. It had an informal tone and used fantastic vocabulary choices.

This week’s Star Writer is Willow from 2S for her descriptive poem. Can you guess the fruit she is describing from the fantastic adjectives she has selected? Willow also presented the poem using an accurate structure, used beautiful handwriting, excellent spelling and correct use of commas to punctuate. Well done Willow!

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Created with an image by George Dolgikh - "Five stars on dark background"