Developing New Worlds / Full Sail University / Justin Brozanski / March 3, 2024
Story Premise
Safe thought she had escaped her troubled past, finding solace in her life as a bartender. But when her estranged sister, Talia, calls for help after killing her boyfriend, Safe's fragile peace is shattered. Together, they must navigate the dangerous waters of hiding a crime, haunted by the trauma of their past. As lead detective Lincoln Brooks, Safe's former fiancé, closes in, the Puckett sisters must confront their demons and protect each other at all costs. But with the quiet town watching their every move, will they salvage their bond, or be consumed by the darkness that threatens to engulf them
Historical Background
Farish, Mississippi
After colonizers defeated the indigenous Choctaw tribe and pushed them west, Farish, Mississippi was officially established in 1870. Nestled in the Mississippi Delta, Farish was a once-prosperous town known for its cotton plantations until it lost access to the Mississippi River, cutting it off from the trade route. White and freedmen landowners devolved into predatory sharecropping tactics to make due and many immigrants from Mexico, China and Italy came to take advantage of the work opportunities. As the civil rights movement made its way through the south, it was met with violent resistance, but it unified the black community and allowed the legislation to been see through. As the economy continued to decline, many began to leave Farish, and despite the racial tension, the town came together as a whole to survive. The people from Farish refrained from speaking on the tension of its dark past, instead letting it lurk unbothered in the town’s slow-paced undercurrent. It isn’t all bad in Farish. The thing that all the locals seem to bond over is Blues music. It even has its own piece of Blues history with Sleepy Eyes Davis, who was an up-and-coming harmonicist that played for many favorite blues artists. He unfortunately died after getting stabbed during a fight in 1922 and was buried in the town's oldest cemetery. After the casinos made their way into Mississippi in the early 1990s, many of the locals began traveling to the neighboring counties to work at there, slowing the mass exodus down to a trickle. Most of the people that remain in Farish have long familial ties to the town, such as Benny, the current owner of Bitter Allen's, a juke joint that's has been in his family for generations.
Main Characters
Sapphire "Safe" Puckett
Safe is a 28-year-old bartender at Bitter Allen’s living in her hometown of Farish. The eldest daughter, Safe worked hard to take care for her younger sister Talia after their mother Jacqueline was arrested and subsequently imprisoned during junior year of high school. She entered college with dreams of becoming a music teacher and building a simple life with her then fiancé Lincoln Brooks. Even though her mother was put away, her years of abuse still haunted her and she couldn't help but blame herself every time something went wrong. Slowly, all the things she wasIt all came to a head when a confrontation between her sister and her drunken boyfriend struck a familiar battered nerve, that she resolved to living a life of solitude. She left Lincoln and limited her contact with her family to the occasional phone call. She has a life. She has friends, but the closeness she once made available to people can't happen anymore. It the only way she can make things rights. She fixed up her home by herself for the most part, and turned it into place worthy the pay penance through isolation. She sinks her loneliness into her own piano compositions no one else hears.
Talia "Tallie" Puckett
Talia Pucket is 23 and never been much for work. She had dreams of being a housewife to some farmer, having babies, and hosting socials. A life of domesticity she only saw on tv like the Brady Bunch. Her sister calls her “soft-hearted” but seeing the good in people means Talia didn’t let the acrid volitity of their mom take over. She likes cooking. She had to since her sister always worked and her mom, well, that is a whole other book of stories. She turned it into honest work at Shorter’s Food n Go, a gas station that doubled as small restaurant. There is where she met Eric Perez, a mill operator who stopped by sometimes for lunch. With his lopsided smile and cheeky words, he worked his way into her heart. She overlooked a lot just to have someone to come home to, even if she took out his problems on her. Atleast his bad days were predictable, unlike their mother. Eric wasn’t the most open. She didn’t know much about his dealings, but she wasn’t stupid. She asked for help once, when Eric got really bad, and he almost killed her sister, so Talia took the fall and promised herself she wouldn’t let Eric hurt anyone she cared about again. She would trapped him a perfect home too beautiful to destroy. She planned to, anyway.
Supporting Characters
Lincoln Brooks
Sergeant Lincoln Brooks is 28 years old and the town’s designated lead investigator, mostly due to his “fancy book-learning” or the psychology degree. A native of Farish, he joined the army at 17 for the free school and travel, but was set on starting a family with Sapphire once he got back, but one day she left without so much as a word and to this day he doesn't really know why. His attention to detail is what really got him far at Farish Police Department, that and the fact that Farish pretty much takes care of itself. The most exciting thing to happen have been a few drug busts. He’s happy with his life and new girlfriend for the most part, although he does bounce around the idea of getting into the FBI, since there’s not much Farish can offer him these days, at least not anymore.
Terry
Terry's a 20-something local delinquent who knows what he likes. Weed. Blow. Barbecue cooked low and slow. He makes no qualms about the way the people of Farish ignore him. It makes life easier, like a superpower. He squirrels his way into most of the illegal dealings that goes down, mostly drugs, which is how he got in the pocket of Eric, Talia's boyfriend. In another life, the two would call each other friends, so when one day Eric goes missing, he uses his invisibility to weasel his way into the investigation. He thinks Eric's disappearance is related to some dealers out in Arkansas and wants the people arrested before they come after him, too. In the ignorance, people underestimate him, but he didn't get this far for no reason.
Jacqueline "Jackie" Puckett
At 13, she ran away from her callous parents' farm, and got to know a lot of seedy characters along the way. Jackie learned to take care of herself, and put her turbulent anger to use. She became a teen mom at 16 and found herself back in Farish only to learn her parents had been bought out and went to live with relatives in Chicago, effectively cutting her off. She had her second daughter Talia around 21 and tried to make a life with her father before her anger chased him away. She took care of herself the best she could, and nicer to her girls than her own mother was at least. But her anger needed somewhere else to go, and the girls were closest. Outside of her job at the factory, she dealt with men to make extra money for herself, but one night it caught up with her when a John got too comfortable. Now, she's in prison for at least 15 years, burning through cigarettes with little contact with her children. In a sick way, she feels more free than ever, surrounded with fellow women in a place where their type of anger can exist without judgement.
Locations
Safe's House
Safe's house is a one-story bungalow and former sharecropper's house. Despite the loose floorboards and shoddy electricity, it had good bones, and throughout the years, she put her money into turning it into a respectable place. She gave it a gave a fresh coat of paint, replaced the electrical and plumbing, and filled it with an eclectic, yet cohesive furniture she's accrued over time. Her pride and joy is upright piano. She spends her free time laying in bed reading dime novels or at her upright piano composing music and writing lyrics. Out the back door leads to her backyard that she doesn't nothing with. There's a line of trees separating it from a field.
Bitter Allen's Joint
Bitter Allen's opened in 1896 by Farish local Benny's great-great grandfather Willie Earl Dixson. It was a prominent juke joint back in the day that played host to blues talent and rum runners. People would dance until the floor cracked. As time passed and people left, Bitter's Allen became more of a local haunt, but Benny still has pride in the place. It's one of if not the oldest surviving businesses in town. It even has secret compartments in the walls and under the floors used to hide people and liquor, although today Benny uses them for storage. He continued the legacy of hosting live music nights and adapted to the times with karaoke machines. Beer's always cold and if he likes you, maybe just maybe he'll let you get a taste of real white lightning.
Farish Police Station
The Farish Police Station is a small, indiscriminate brick building located just off the main road. There's two main offices, two jail cells, an interrogation room, and evidence room, although most of the evidence has to be sent a way somewhere else for proper analysis. There's also an open space for work desks that the officers share. It houses a police force of just five, sometimes 6 officers who do their share of patrolling, investigating, and evidence collecting. Advancement is mostly based on a meritocracy and the process is very informal. It gives people an excuse to bring in cake.
additional world information
Behind the Curtain of Farish, Mississippi
Farish is a fictional town based several ones located in the Mississippi delta. Its history and culture is based on cities and towns located in Issaquena, Washington, and Warren Counties. The time period is set summer in the late 90s. During the early 90s, larger counties on the rivers began to open casinos after the legalization of gambling in order to boost the state's economy that declined because of the automation of farming and overtaking of individual farming for corporate agribusiness. Individuals that didn't participate in the Great Migration, or a mass exodus of rural African Americans into northern, industrious cities, that began around 1910, struggled with finding work, pursuing education, and accessing healthcare. Community ties strengthened among black people as they pushed for civil rights that were met with violent resistance by the white locals. Immigrant communities all meshed their own culture with that of those from the Delta, a big part of the exchange being food and music. A phenomena that speaks of the veil of silence that falls over a town, specially towns in Mississippi, when something occurs but the community chooses not to speak on it is called the magnolia curtain. There is no real explanation for where it comes from, but some assume it stems from the long history of racial tension of the South that garnered a huge amount of distrust in police or people of power since even though the communities were largely black, those positions were typically held by white people. Speaking up about injustices rarely brought about real change, and sometimes It was better to protect your families from the life-threatening repercussions of speaking up. There is also a culture of keeping your personal issues in your house, and it being more polite to put on facade of a happy home than burden others. Ironically, this also plays into gossip culture where it's the norm the pursue information of your neighbors while also acting as if you don't know anything when speaking to that particular person.
Synopsis
Sapphire gets a call from her estranged sister who confesses to killing her boyfriend. She rushes over to find a tear-stained Talia and dead Eric on the floor. Quickly, they work to hide the body then split up to go on as normal while figuring out their next steps. Sapphire gets frequent visits from Lincoln Brooks, her ex and lead investigator, who feels as though they are lying. Sapphire suggests they give the police something to chase, so they leave part of his arm at a nearby reservoir. As word spreads through town, like the night their mother was arrested for attempted murder, the pair butt heads as they confront that time plus the many others that drove a wedge between them. They learn that both have been visiting their mother Jackie in prison and visit her together. She offers weak advice and forbids them from returning. They have a close call with police, but by luck,Terry, an associate of Eric, presents a new suspect, and they remain unfound. From that moment, they come up with the plan to involve the whole town in his death. They trick Terry into revealing Eric’s local dealings and implicate several of the local big figures in the murder. The community buckles as their secrets are revealed and force Lincoln to stop investigating. Lincoln still holds his suspicions of the sisters, but he can’t bring himself to pursue it any longer. Talia moves in to Sapphire's place with promises to protect each other forever.
Excerpt
“I should explain,” Talia said.
Safe shook her head. “It don’t matter. We need to do this now.”
Safe went to the back of the shed and grabbed a saw. Talia stepped back and folded her arms around herself. Safe returned to the workbench where Eric laid. Talia crept up until she felt her looming presence over her shoulder. It reminded her of when they were young, and Talia would hide behind her legs while at the store.
“He don’t look like he’s sleeping,” Talia said.
“What,” Safe asked. She faced her.
In all the chaos, she didn’t get a chance to look at her. It only had been 4 years but that was enough to become a whole other person. Her nails were chewed to the quick, and she’d lost weight. She’d long grown taller than her, but still she looked so tiny Safe could cradle her. She didn’t. The light in her round eyes, that twinkle she used to call starshine when they were kids, was gone. They looked empty like when deer got shot so clean they just laid there while everything about them soaked into the ground.
“Well, people say the dead look like they’re sleeping, but he looks more, well, dead," Talia said.
Safe rolled her eyes. “I reckon it’s because he is.”
“He look empty.”
“Focus, Tallie. Lincoln knows something’s up.”
“How do you know?”
“I know Lincoln.”
It was only a few hours until daylight and they still had to make it look like no one’s been messing around Jericho’s shed before they left. She went from his arm and leg, before settling at his arm. Her palms grew slick and her heart beat against her ribcage like a rabid animal. But it was the only thing they could do.
“We don’t need much,” she said out loud to no one. She pressed the saw against the inside of his elbow, trying to recall how Jericho used the same saw on a gator last summer. She’d make it up to him. She didn’t know when, and he wouldn’t know why, but she would. Jericho being gone for fishing season on the coast saved their skin. Just as she was about to slide the blade across his skin she stopped and looked up at Talia. She paused before shoving the saw into Talia's chest.
“You do it.”
Talia gaped. “Why me?” She dropped it and stepped back. “Why do we need to do that at all?”
“You think I just know how to get rid of a body? Lie to police. No. I’m figuring this out right along with you.” She retrieved the saw from the ground and held it to Talia’s chest. “We just need to bide some time, make them chase their tails for a while. Get them looking somewhere else, so I can fucking think.”
Talia stared at Safe, and she suddenly felt small. Guilt rose like bile in Safe’s throat. She slunk to the sink and filled the nearest glass with water before gulping it down. It was crazy. She knew it, but she also knew she didn’t know what else to do. She ran her fingers through her hair.
“Okay,” Talia said.
Safe faced her again.
“Just a little bit,” she asked.
Safe nodded.
Talia gripped the saw with trembling hands and placed it in the same spot Safe did. As she went to cut, she stopped herself. She stared into the empty-faced Eric before turning his head away towards the wall as if he could see. As if he knew what was happening to him. She sawed into his arm and it took everything in her not throw up. Her faced felt hot and her body shook, and it was only when Safe crossed the room that she realized she was crying. But Safe didn’t cross the room to comfort her. Instead, she turned Eric’s head back so that it was facing her. His dead-fish eyes bore into her. She kept cutting.
“You know how momma let us sit with our burns after we touched the stove, so we wouldn’t do it again,” Safe asked. “What you’re feeling right now, I want you to sit in it. I want you to see it looking back at you. Because if by some miracle we make it out of this, I want to make damn sure you never do anything this stupid again.”
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